15 March 2012

Similes

This week we have been learning about similes. Here is a recount using a fabulous simile!

Zach

Yahoo! Zach's mum drove me to Zach's house. When we got there Zach's mum opened the door. Zach's gigantic dog pounced up at me. Lick lick lick! What a surpirsie! His tongue felt like bumpy pebbles.

By Pinecone Head

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